On the weekend I want to my papas house and I want fishing with my papa and he got a snapper I got a kahawai after that we want to get fish&chips then we want home that was a cool day with my papa and when we got home we winch a move on Netflix then it got dark and we had dinner after that I want to sleep.
Kia Ora,Jahkaya
ReplyDeleteMy name is Abbey and I am a student in Room 4 at Tautoro School. I am 7 years old.
I really like your story about you and your papa going fishing.
I liked your work because you caught a Kahawai and your papa caught a snapper.
You were confused with went and want, so you might need to work on that.
Blog ya later.
Kia Ora, Jahkaya
ReplyDeleteMy name is Tumanako and I am a student in Room 4 at Tautoro School. I am 7 years old.
I really like your recount about going fishing with your papa.
I liked your work because your story made me happy especially the part about when you caught a kahawai and your papa caught a snapper. That was cool.
Blog ya later.
Hello Jahkaya
ReplyDeleteMy name is Lana and I am a student in Room 4 at Tautoro School. I am 8 years old.
I really like your recount about going to your papa’s house and going with him to go fishing.
I liked your work because you caught a kahawai and your papa caught a snapper.
Blog ya later.