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Monday, June 10, 2019

On the weekend I want to my papas house and I want fishing with my papa and he got a snapper I got a kahawai after that we want to get fish&chips then we want home that was a cool day with my papa and when we got home we winch a move on Netflix then it got dark and we had dinner after that I want to sleep.

3 comments:

  1. Kia Ora,Jahkaya
    My name is Abbey and I am a student in Room 4 at Tautoro School. I am 7 years old.
    I really like your story about you and your papa going fishing.
    I liked your work because you caught a Kahawai and your papa caught a snapper.
    You were confused with went and want, so you might need to work on that.
    Blog ya later.

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  2. Kia Ora, Jahkaya
    My name is Tumanako and I am a student in Room 4 at Tautoro School. I am 7 years old.
    I really like your recount about going fishing with your papa.
    I liked your work because your story made me happy especially the part about when you caught a kahawai and your papa caught a snapper. That was cool.
    Blog ya later.

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  3. Hello Jahkaya
    My name is Lana and I am a student in Room 4 at Tautoro School. I am 8 years old.
    I really like your recount about going to your papa’s house and going with him to go fishing.
    I liked your work because you caught a kahawai and your papa caught a snapper.
    Blog ya later.

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